Write Stuff Wednesday: Body Language

It’s Write Stuff Wednesday, and today I’m talking about body language. Character’s aren’t talking heads in a space free of objects, colors, movements, and other people. Facial expressions, actions while speaking, small gestures, and movements by others all come into play in the real world. These elements must also exist in the story world. Below are a few of the sites I find helpful when my mind draws a blank for words other than “nodded” and “grinned”.

Nownovel.com
Movement with Dialogue
The entire site offers a wealth of helpful writing information.

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https://www.bryndonovan.com/
Bryn Donovan’s Master List of Body language and Gestures
Be sure to spend some time checking out the countless other lists and articles on writing she has shared.

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https://kathysteinemann.com
400+ Facial Expressions
Stick around for the many other resources such as Writing Tips, Writing Tools, and Word Lists (to name a few).

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https://writerswrite.co.za
Body Language Cheat Sheet
Snippet below – see link for full list.

writersdigest.com
Writing Mistakes Writers Make: Basic Character Descriptions
I came across this article last week and appreciated the suggestions to move beyond many common mistakes.

Tuesday’s Tops List: Cozy Mystery Movies

Cozy mystery movies are my not-so-secret addiction. I suppose it all started in 1986 with Stand By Me, adapted from Stephen King’s The Body. My VHS tape played on the VCR (yes, I’m dating myself) more times than I’d ever dare attempt to count. I was 12 years old, so River Phoenix might have had something to do with that. But I was equally as hooked on the storyline.

Thirty-ish years later, I discovered Aurora Teagarden and Hannah Swenson.You’ll find a bit of a theme here, and that theme is Hallmark. Not exclusively, but noticeably.

Aurora Teagarden Mysteries

This series, starring Candace Cameron Bure, premiered in 2015 and resulted in a grand total of 18 movies. Based on the book series by Charmaine Harris, an amateur sleuth/librarian solves murders with help from her best friend and members of The Real Murders Club. As a die-hard fan of Taxi, Marilou Henner, starring as Aurora’s mother, might be my favorite character. Now that Candace Cameron Bure has moved on to GAC, the series has ended. However, Hallmark recently announced the series will be rebooted as a prequel with Skyler Samuels taking on the role of Aurora as a young, post-college graduate. I’m looking forward to seeing this new take on an old favorite.

Crossword Mysteries

Lacey Chabert and Brennan Elliott star in this Hallmark series about a crossword editor who helps a detective solve mysteries in New York City. I originally tuned in because I love crossword puzzles and always wanted a bird’s-eye view of the job. But I continued to watch thanks to the storylines, cast, and city setting.

Matchmaker Mysteries

Yes, another Hallmark offering – this one starring Danica McKellar and Victor Webster. The matchmaker has her own TV show but spends her free time solving murder mysteries. Danica McKellar also moved over to GAC. Fortunately, reruns pop every once in a while.

Flower Shop Mysteries

I loved this series, starring Brooke Shields and Brennan Elliott. Originally a book series by Kate Collins, the movies follow former-lawyer-turned-florist, Abby, as she spends her free time solving the whodunits in her small town. I love this series, but future installments don’t appear to be in the works.

Murder, She Baked

I’m a huge fan of Joanne Fluke’s Hannah Swenson book series, and this is my favorite of all Hallmark movie series. Allison Sweeney stars as baker/amateur sleuth, Hannah. When not running her bakery or following a trail of clues, she dabbles in the romance department with local police officer, Mike (Cameron Mathison). I’m excited to see a new movie is scheduled for release this year.

Knives Out

Detective Benoit Blanc (Daniel Craig) is tasked with solving the mysterious death of crime novelist Harlan Thrombey. Everyone in her family is a suspect. I was reminded of classic murder mystery movies set in a gorgeous yet creepy, old house – think Clue.

Glass Onion

Detective Benoit Blanc is at it again, this time solving the murder of a guest on billionaire Miles Bron’s private Greek island. Here’s to hoping for a third installment in a fun movie franchise that always delivers an entertaining mystery and an eclectic cast of characters.

Murder Mystery

This movie starring Adam Sandler and Jennifer Aniston is so much fun to watch. While on a European vacation, a New York police office and his wife are framed for the murder of a billionaire and must work to prove their innocence. This was one of those movies I knew I’d love, and it delivered. Murder Mystery 2 is now streaming on Netflix. I’m itching to watch, but waiting for my daughter’s next trip home from college. Family Movie Night!!!

Stand By Me

Four Oregon boys set off on a coming-of-age quest to find a missing teenager’s body. This movie doesn’t quite fit the cozy genre. But I felt compelled to include the title because the suspense surrounding the missing teen is second only to an emotional, yet humorous, story of friendship.

Author Interview with Darlene Fredette

Please join me in welcoming Darlene Fredette, author of Trickster. I’m excited to share another story from the Mortar & Pestle collection. Read on for more information about Darlene and this intriguing fantasy romance. Be sure to take advantage of her giveaway – A free PDF copy of The Mortar and Pestle Preview.

ABOUT THE BOOK:

Title: Trickster

Author: Darlene Fredette

Genre: Contemporary Fantasy Romance

BLURB:

Can she heal the trickster before he breaks her heart?

Working for a top modeling agency is Jade Parsons’s dream job until her boss suffers a heart attack, and his son temporarily fills his position. Eric’s push-pull approach fuels her frustration. While anticipating the troublemaker’s imminent departure, Jade’s destiny is revealed through a magical mortar and pestle, leaving her heart tormented by whispers of a different fate.

World-renowned photographer Eric Martini returns home to restore his relationship with his estranged father, but wounds from the past haunt him. Enchanted by his father’s feisty assistant, he masks his heart and refuses to give in to desire. Convinced his destined future is already written in the stars—and doesn’t include Jade, Eric’s only choice is to walk away.

Will Jade and Eric find the courage to trust the mythical and smokey signs before their paths are severed forever?

INTERVIEW:

Where do you get your ideas? 

This is going to sound weird, but my story ideas usually come to me when I’m doing housework. An idea will pop into my head and by the time the house is clean, I have a story mapped out. Now, if I could just plug a cable into my head and download those ideas into my computer. 😊

Do ideas for plot or characters come first?

They take turns. Most of my books are part of a series (Redford Falls), so I have a whole town of characters to choose from. There may be a secondary character that steps up and says ‘hey, it’s my turn’. Or a new plot idea sparks, and I think about which character would fit best into that storyline.

Have you ever traveled when researching information for a book?

I wish! If I could travel to research my books, I’d come up with stories taking place in  Australia, Italy, Ireland, France – and the list goes on. Though I think I might be too busy taking in the sites to write, lol.

How many hours do you dedicate each day towards writing?

Sometimes, I get an hour or two in the morning and another hour or two in the afternoon. But daily life tends to get in the way. If I plan to write, something always comes up, so I don’t set a defined writing time. I just write when I can, and I no longer put pressure on myself when a day goes off schedule.

What has been your biggest challenge?

I am a slow writer. If I get a few hours in a day to write, I might only get a couple of pages written. I don’t write to get the story moving. It has to make sense. I also edit as I write, so progress is slow. It’s the perfectionist in me.

Upcoming Books:

With Trickster being newly released and promoting it, I haven’t had a chance to start a new story. My Redford Falls series has four more stories to tell, but I’m not sure when they’ll get started. However, I highly recommend everyone check out the other six stories in The Mortar and Pestle series!

GIVEWAWAY

I’m giving away a free PDF copy of The Mortar and Pestle Preview. This preview document is similar to the free prequel offered in Book Funnel, but the preview has tons of additional fun stuff – more graphics, book teasers, an inside look at how the series came to life, and much more! To get this free preview, pop over to my author website http://darlenefredette.blogspot.com/ and send me a note using the Contact Form on the left sidebar. No rafflecopter, no contest, and no drawing of names. Just send me a note through the secure Contact Form. It’s that easy!

AUTHOR BIO:

Darlene resides on the Atlantic Coast of Canada where the summers are too short, and the winters are too long. Retired from a career as Director of Administration and Marketing, she now has eleven published contemporary romance books and is an artist at heart. When she isn’t researching her next book or having a pencil, paintbrush, or a cup of hot chocolate in her hand, she’s with her husband, daughter, and one-hundred-pound yellow Labrador.

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Book in the Spotlight: Don’t Mess with Me (Berkshire Mystery Series)

Please join me in welcoming Mary Ann Jacobs. Today we are spotlighting Don’t Mess With Me, Book 1 in the Berkshire Mystery Series. I love cozy mysteries that include a group of amateur sleuths working to solve a mystery. Factor in the beautiful Berkshires, and I’m ready to read!

ABOUT THE BOOK:

Title: Don’t Mess with Me

Series: Berkshire Mystery Series

Author: Mary Ann Jacobs

Genre: Cozy Mystery

BLURB:

Sheriff Houtman, who left Boston to have a more peaceful career, finds himself faced with two murders and a kidnapping. He is challenged by a band of amateur sleuths who doubt his competence. Will his conclusions hold, or will he have to admit defeat? Unfortunately, Sheriff Houtman’s judgement is impaired because of his infatuation with Sadie, and his immediate suspicion of a homeless teen that Robin and Sadie befriended.

Robin George narrates the story. She is a widow with a young son who moves to the Berkshires after her beloved husband died. Her bookstore, Bookworms, and Sweet Indulgences, her best friend Sadie’s restaurant, become the hubs for Robin’s amateur detective group where they plan how to solve the local crimes and exonerate Billy, the Sheriff’s main suspect.

Will they prove the Sheriff wrong?

AUTHOR BIO:

I have taught writing in elementary school, high school, and college. I am now a writer, a teacher of Creative Writing, and a writing coach.  Some of my essays have been published in Moida Quarterly Magazine, Kentucky Monthly Magazine, Motherwell online, KRTA News, and Teachers of Vision Magazine.  I have published poems in various publications including Elephants Never online, SOS Arts Cincinnati, and The Kentucky English Bulletin.

I enjoy writing essays, poetry, mysteries, and children’s books. I am excited that my cozy mystery, Don’t Mess with Me in the Berkshire Mystery Series is published by The Wild Rose Press. It is available on Amazon as an ebook and paperback.

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Guest Post with Author Daryl Devore

Please join me in welcoming author Daryl Devore. As a fellow pantser, Daryl’s guest post truly resonated with me. Characters do take on a life of their own and, on occasion, try to take over the writing of their own story. Read on for an interesting spin on how they sometimes decide their own fate.

ABOUT THE BOOK:

Title: A Voice in the Air

Author: Daryl Devore

Genre: Sweet Medieval Fantasy Romance

BLURB:

Leading an army of faeries and pixies into battle against mountain trolls was not what Cadi expected when she accepted the task of rescuing Ewen – the son of the Overseer of the Faeries.

Squire Ewen followed his liege into battle with a head full of romantic notions of knights, heroics, and damsels in distress. Being captured by a troll, thrown into a cave, and awaiting a hideous death was not how he had foreseen his adventure to play out.

Can Ewen stay out of trouble long enough for Cadi to rescue him? Will Cadi overcome her doubts and fears and bring her beloved Ewen home to Plucks Ridge?

Or will the petty evilness of The Scorned One defeat all and destroy the magickal realm?

If you love action, humour, quirky characters, and romance, then Daryl Devoré’s latest medieval fantasy romance – A Voice in the Air – is a must read.

GUEST POST:

A rambling look at the main character in A Voice in the Air.

Cadi is a barmaid who lives in the 1100s -ish. There is no real time frame except that it is hundreds of years ago. And it is not Ye Olde Englande.

Some of the names of people and places are Welsh – Irish – Scottish and English – oh – and Norwegian – I forgot about the troll. The sheriff’s name – Grwn – is old Welsh(?) if I remember. Cadi’s horse’s name – Cheffyl -is the older Welsh spelling of the word “horse”. I don’t remember where I got Cadi’s name, but once I had it – it stuck.

After being freed from the abbey prison cell – she is given a quest by the Overseer of the Faeries – to find the Overseer’s son. Who just happens to be the person Cadi has a secret longing for.

The story then follows Cadi as she struggles to find Ewen in a time that does not consider the value of a woman. This short excerpt explains it all from Cadi’s point of view.

***Grwn shrugged as contempt crossed his face. The scar above his lip increasing the repugnance of his sneer.

She knew why, even though she refused to accept it. In this moment, for that man, the most horrible, most repulsive idea was not the death surrounding them or the endless pain of the survivors. His disgust arose because she was only a woman — and an unwed one at that — and she’d dared to ask a question of so important a personage as himself.

Many thought she had no rights or a say in matters, being over sixteen years, still unwed, and from away. A man-less woman was worth less than a cow. But she did not believe that to be so. The fighter in her raised its voice.***

Throughout the story, I kept the characters (Cadi and Ewen) apart – up to the point I thought my cp (critique partner) was going to scream with frustration. During all that time – Cadi is looking for Ewen – which Ewen is aware of and he is trying to find her while he constantly worries – she is just a lass – she must be terrified – I must find her and save her. Then he immediately gets himself into another life-threatening situation.

Meantime “helpless” Cadi had fended off (1) a potential attacker, (2) an evil sorceress and (3) an enraged, cursed troll and she’s not even up to the middle of the book yet.

Why did I choose to let Cadi be the hero? I didn’t. She did. She led the story right from the start and I had the wherewithal to let her. I came up with obstacles to put in her path and she surprised me with her solutions.

For the non-writers reading this – our characters are real in our heads. We know everything about them. I remember a conversation with a non-writer where I was explaining that I was composing a character interview for a blog post. The person was puzzled by how I could create an interview with a fictional character. Then I started explaining what I knew about the character and left the poor person dumbstruck. I could probably get down to the person’s blood type if I wanted to.

I am not a plotter. I am a card-carrying pantser. I write by the seat of my pants. I don’t know what’s going to happen from one page to the next. But once, by about chapter 2-3, once I have the character in my head – I know everything. I don’t know how or why I know all of this – but I do. When someone tells me that the character wouldn’t do that – I usually disagree. I may not have told the reader why the character did it – I may never do that or I may reveal it later in the story – but I do know why.

Why might I not tell the reader? Let them think about it and figure it out. They might choose the wrong reason, but what does that really matter? What’s wonderful is they took time to think about a character in my book. Someone to me who is “real”. And what author wouldn’t like readers to think about our stories and characters long after they have closed the book’s cover or clicked off their tablet?

Happy reading.

AUTHOR BIO:

Two writers in one. Daryl Devoré (@daryldevore) writes hot romances with sexy heroes and strong heroines and sweet romances with little to no heat. Each of her characters is so captivating they leave her readers spellbound as they rush to reach the end of her stories. She has several published books available in ebook, print and audio – available at Amazon and other book retailers via Books2Read.

Daryl lives in an old farmhouse in Ontario, Canada, with her husband and 2 cats. Daryl loves to take long walks on her quiet country road or snowshoe across the back acres, and in the summer, kayak along the St. Lawrence River. She has touched a moon rock, a mammoth, and a meteorite. She’s been deep in the ocean in a submarine, flown high over Niagara Falls in a helicopter, and used the ladies room in a royal palace. Life’s an adventure and Daryl’s having fun living it.

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